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lights faded on your stara dancer's grace was
embedded in her bone-deep
muscle memories
La tete dans les etoiles - A head full of stars(scroll down for English)

La tête dans les étoiles

Amarré au quai
Rêve bleu au goût de sel
Un cliché s’envole

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A head full of stars

Tied up to the shore
Blue pipe dream, its taste of salt
A cliché takes off

- SophieCT, 17 mai 2013
Challenge Haiku 38 - Little girlYoung, small and fragile
Playing among the flowers
Pure innocence born
*Game of Marbles*Vibrant colours swirl
Glass marbles, small works of art
Lost, no longer mine.

2013 Delice1941
15th May2013
A Fresh StartWatching the sun rise
Yesterday's pain fades away
I can start anew
Challenge Haiku 40 - LiesFibs and deceptions
Those words you spun together
Heart stabbed by each one
Take It All InTake It All In
 
Close your eyes my dear,
Quit talking for a moment,
And enjoy this.
*Cold*Quiet, space has no noise
Cryo-sleep dreamless and cold
Blank faces frozen

2013 Delice1941
19th May2013
RebirthShe swelled with pride and
joy, for their pride and joy swelled
from a second chance.
Insomnia    Through the darkened skies,
light shall flood the plains of sleep.
       The sun has risen.

 Daylight beckons them,
coaxes dreamers form the deep.
  Back to life's prison.

Morning's bright disguise,
holds evil within its keep.
    False reality.

  Conscious, they condemn
their minds to be led like sheep.
    Night's mortality.

Copyright © 2013 LYNETTE EMERY. All rights reserved.  
Challenge Haiku 41 - WorkDaily grind of life
Needed to survive this world
Different day, same shit
The Irony Of LifeIt's so ironic
that living my daily life
sucks my life away
forsaken by loveForever smiling, all your wishes have come true, so you'd like to think

On and on it goes, until it hits you harshly, your dreams turn to dust

Running will not help, it will hunt you far and wide, forcing you to hope

Some say love is good, but if it makes you suffer...is it really good?

Aftermath of tears, any marriage can end bad, should i care at all?

"Knock on wood" they say, does praying help more than that? why no answer yet?

Even as i doubt, after being scourged by love, it beckons me still

Not caring to flee, i walk towards it again, asking for more pain

But maybe this time, it might be diff'rent for me, i think to myself

Yeah
Challenge Haiku 39 - SeaAlmighty movement
Nearly unstoppable brine
Erodes like the dark
CloggedClogged
 
I have fecal stasis,
‘Cause I’m full of crappy thoughts,
And I can’t flush (shhhhh)it.
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Language is words,
it is not grammar or marks,
words make up being.
:icondaimyoshi:
Any one who followed me with any sense of regularity or for any real length of time realizes that I have a horrible sense when it come to both spelling and grammar, and that grammar especially holds a great number of personal demons for myself. Seriously I have on several occasion struggled with a words and spelling so much that I have spent as much as a half hour trying to spell a word well enough that the spell-checker will give me a result with the correct spelling. I have quite often been totally vex by the Spell-checker's inability to understand how I am misspelling the word and had to go to some other word that sounds dumber. Grammar is pretty much forgot as I don't recognize the errors. the results are less that enjoyable. Ironically I speak very well, and have a rather advance vocabulary when speaking, my speech is often pepper with 35 dollar college words as one of my bosses would say. A recent argument about Grammar led to a friend posting this video from Youtube with a Essay by Stephen Fry. [link]
let us face it I loved it watch it three time just today, certainly part of that is because of the typography video itself, but the words are just as important. Indeed Haiku is my favourite kind of poetry for several reason, one of which is the relative freedom from Grammar i enjoy.

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